Thursday 15 June 2017

Show not tell - Fake Battle

WALT use spark to present our writing I enjoyed awesome words about the battle. I also liked using the simile. I found it challenging to come up with the simile that's what made it fun.
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  1. Grace16 June 2017 at 11:48

    hi Kalani its Grace H here I love the way you use powerful words in your video. To be BTB you might want to speak a bit louder in your video and turn the volume down.

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  2. Anonymous25 August 2017 at 12:33

    Hi kalani best video ever From Angus

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