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Hello my name is Dion If you wanted to you could add a bit more detail about the game that you are trying to solve? Also I liked how you tried to pesway people to play Tynker and I can perfectly see the writing and your words make it sound fun for others so they can try it out and do waht we done.
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DeleteGreat comment Dion! I agree with Dion - Kalani you have done a wonderful job of making Tynker sound interesting and fun and I would also like to know more about the game you are working on. I look forward to hearing more about it.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a awesome peace of work.
You have done a wonderful job of making this sound super interesting.
for something to think about you could add a little bit more information and also put full stops at the end of your sentience's.
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