Thursday 2 July 2020

the sea adventure

  this was really hard and fun I loved doing this and loved writing this I hope I can do it again it was not easy that's why it was fun to try it may you can try and see how fun it is so try it

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kalani I like the story of the sea adventure but next time make it longer.but you did a great job.

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  2. thanks and we had to turn it in

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