Thursday 16 April 2020

the stolen stars of matariki


                      it was hard to edit
                     
                      it was easy to film

                      it was fun to film

2 comments:

  1. Great work Kalani! Tino pai! I like how you made the start like a real news report, it really made it feel like I was actually watching the 6 o'clock news. Maybe next time you could practice what you are going to say a bit more so it sounds more like a new report.
    Keep up the great work!

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  2. I loved your report. The start with the different pictures was amazing and must taken a lot of time to choose it and get it right. You spoke in nice clear voice with good volume. Maybe next time just give a short outline what the story is about. I did like how you said why you liked the story and that it can be seen in different ways. Keep up the good work. Sharron

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.